From 5f6151088194b6e3dfcd0753c8c38aaf73d63ca6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sebin Nyshkim <sebin.nyshkim@icloud.com>
Date: Thu, 6 Jan 2022 21:22:17 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] feat: updated anatomy description for Sebin

---
 src/views/Anatomy.vue | 94 +++++++++++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 file changed, 54 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/views/Anatomy.vue b/src/views/Anatomy.vue
index 84b9969..6c997b5 100644
--- a/src/views/Anatomy.vue
+++ b/src/views/Anatomy.vue
@@ -61,19 +61,23 @@
     </quick-facts>
 
     <p>
-      Sebin is a bipedal plantigrade. His body is mostly covered by red scales
-      with yellow chest plates running from below his chin over his torso all
-      the way down between his legs and underside of his tail. His physique is
-      athletic to muscular. His fingers and toes are equipped sharp black claws.
-      Brown spikes run along his spine down to the tip of his tail. His tail is
-      about one meter in length.
+      As the offspring of a union between human and dragon, Sebin is a bipedal
+      plantigrade. The majority of his body is covered in red scales. A strip of
+      yellow scales runs from the underside of his jaw, extending down his chest
+      through his legs to the underside of the tip of his tail. The scales on
+      his chest are characterized by a special toughness to better protect vital
+      organs. He also has an athletic to muscular physique that he continuously
+      tends to keep in shape. Finger and toe tips are armed with sharp, black
+      claws, which serve him equally as tools and weapons. Brown spines run from
+      head to spine to tip of tail, though they are too blunt to pose a risk of
+      injury. His tail is about one meter in length.
     </p>
 
     <h3>Wings</h3>
 
     <quick-facts>
       <ul>
-        <li>Wingspan 3-4 meters</li>
+        <li>Wingspan 3-4 meters (9 ft 10 in - 13 ft 1 in)</li>
         <li>Closed when on the ground</li>
         <li>Function like a second pair of arms</li>
         <li>Pointy talon on end of "hand"</li>
@@ -81,12 +85,17 @@
     </quick-facts>
 
     <p>
-      His wing span is around 3-4 meters. He has them closed when on the ground.
-      His wings function like a second pair of arms, at which ends are hand-like
-      limbs with a black talon on top and finger-like extensions, in between
-      which are the membranes of his wings. He can use his wings to fly short
-      distances. Longer distances become difficult due to fatigue of having to
-      carry his own weight with his wings alone.
+      Sebin's wings have a span of about 3-4 meters (9 ft 10 in - 13 ft 1 in).
+      They function very much like a second pair of arms: two interconnected
+      limbs that form a bendable <em>arm</em>, at the end of which sits a
+      <em>hand-like</em> structure, adorned with a talon in exchange for a
+      <em>thumb</em>, with a sturdy membrane stretched between its long
+      <em>fingers</em>. On solid ground, he keeps his wings closed so as not to
+      accidentally bump into anything with them. Sebin also pays a lot of
+      attention to his wings when working out, so that they can keep carrying
+      him reliably through the air. Though, he only travels short to medium
+      distances through the air before he has to take a rest - as long as the
+      airspace in the area has been declared open for wing bearers.
     </p>
 
     <h3>Head</h3>
@@ -122,15 +131,19 @@
     </quick-facts>
 
     <p>
-      He has round pupils instead of the slit ones typical for reptilians. He
-      has short yellow spikes above his eyes that resemble eyebrows, as well as
-      spikes along the jawline of his cheeks. He has black horns growing out of
-      his head which are mostly straight but slightly curve downwards. His hair
-      is blue and he wears it in varying styles. He has long pointy ears which
-      he can move to determine the origin of sounds around him. He also uses
-      them to express emotion. His teeth are very sharp. In his throat are
-      glands that produce a mixture that allows him to breathe fire. His tongue
-      has a pointy tip.
+      Despite what one might expect with reptilians, Sebin's pupils are rounded
+      instead of slit-shaped. Yellow spikes running above his eyelids serve as
+      eyebrows. These spikes are also found along his jaw bone. Two pointed,
+      slightly curved, black horns protrude from his head. He usually wears his
+      medium-length, blue hair loose. His long, pointed ears are very flexible,
+      allowing him to hear sounds around him without having to turn his head.
+      They are also used for non-verbal communication, to express emotions
+      through body language. His hearing perceives a wider range of frequencies,
+      making it superior to that of a human. His jaws are equipped with
+      razor-sharp teeth that effortlessly sink into anything he manages to bite,
+      be it nourishment or adversaries. Embedded between them lies his tongue,
+      which is typically pointed for reptilians. Glands in his throat produce a
+      mixture which he uses to spit fire, which can reach up to around 100 °C.
     </p>
 
     <h3>Upper Body</h3>
@@ -145,11 +158,11 @@
     </quick-facts>
 
     <p>
-      Sebin started working out at the age of 17. Being in top shape is very
-      important to him. His favorite workouts are weight-lifting (dumbbells as
-      well as barbells), lat pulldown, leg press, straight arm pulldown and
-      cable pull. He works out three times a week with one day in between
-      workout days for rest, switching body regions each workout day.
+      At the age of 17, Sebin gradually began to keep his body in shape on a
+      regular basis. His favorite exercises include weightlifting (with both
+      dumbbells and barbells), lat pulldown, leg press and cable curls. He works
+      out three days a week with one day off between training days, rotating the
+      body regions he trains each day.
     </p>
 
     <ref-figure polaroidBorder>
@@ -166,11 +179,10 @@
     </ref-figure>
 
     <p>
-      Sebin is very focused on evenly distributed muscle mass but pays special
-      attention to his back, chest and arms. This is so his fire breath doesn't
-      get weak and he can throw fire projectiles farther. A strong back ensures
-      his wings continue to carry him so he can stay airbourne for extended
-      periods of time.
+      Sebin is very concerned with an even distribution of muscle mass, but pays
+      particular attention to his back, chest and arms. A strong chest with
+      strong arms helps to throw fire projectiles as far as possible. A strong
+      back guarantees a longer stay in the air.
     </p>
 
     <h3>Additional Muscle References</h3>
@@ -366,14 +378,16 @@
       </quick-facts>
 
       <p>
-        Despite his majorly reptilian appearance he has nipples, a feature of
-        the human side of his family, which also shows with his external
-        testicles. Rather than a slit which houses his penis he has a pouch-like
-        sheath, with the tip slightly peeking out of it when not aroused. His
-        penis is mainly humanoid in shape but is surrounded by several ridges.
-        He can take it out of its pouch while it's still soft (e.g. for passing
-        water). When aroused his charcoal black shaft pushes out from the
-        sheath, its base girded by the sheath like a ring.
+        Despite his reptilian appearance, Sebin has nipples, a feature of the
+        human side of his family. Furthermore, his external testicles represent
+        another humanized feature. Where relatives of his ilk possess a slit in
+        which the penis lies protectively, Sebin possesses a pouch-like sheath
+        from which the tip of the penis protrudes slightly. The shape of his
+        shaft is predominantly humanoid, but it is surrounded by ridges and has
+        no equivalent of a foreskin. When aroused, the coal-black shaft swells
+        and pushes out of the sheath until fully erect, the sheath wrapping
+        around the root of the shaft like a ring. However, he can also push it
+        out in a flaccid state, e.g. when needing to pass water.
       </p>
     </template>