feat: 💬 update sebin's character descriptions

src/sebin/anatomy.md

@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ Sebin's fingers and toes are equipped with sharp black claws, which he uses in a
 
 A ridge of brown thorns runs along Sebin's spine, from the base of his neck all the way down to his tail tip. These thorns may look intimidating, but they're too blunt to cause injury. His tail is about <span @text="tailLength / 100" webc:nokeep></span> meters (<span @text="toImperial(tailLength)" webc:nokeep></span>) in length and is quite strong and flexible. He uses it as support to lean against when a back rest is hard to come by as well as holding onto things. As with his claws, his tail is both tool and defense instrument, a good whack from it is sure to make you see stars.
 
-Despite his reptilian heritage, Sebin inherited nipples from the human side of his family.
+Despite his reptilian heritage, Sebin inherited nipples from the human side of his bloodline.
 
-Sebin has a muscular build that he keeps in shape with regular exercise, which he is very disciplined about. He prioritizes strength training, cardiovascular workouts, and flexibility exercises as part of his regular routine. He always challenges himself and pushes his body to its limits.
+Sebin maintains a muscular build with very disciplined, regular exercise. He prioritizes strength training, cardiovascular workouts, and flexibility exercises as part of his regimen to keep in shape.
 
 ## Wings
 
@@ -46,11 +46,11 @@ Sebin has a muscular build that he keeps in shape with regular exercise, which h
   <traits :@traits="$data.getTraits('wings')"></traits>
 </quick-info>
 
-Sebin's wings span around <span @text="wingspan / 100" webc:nokeep></span> meters (<span @text="toImperial(wingspan)" webc:nokeep></span>) from tip to tip. They function much like a second pair of arms, consisting of two interconnected limbs that form a bendable arm, complete with a hand-like structure at the end. In this hand, a sharp talon takes the place of a thumb, and a sturdy membrane stretches between its long fingers.
+Sebin's wings span around <span @text="wingspan / 100" webc:nokeep></span> meters (<span @text="toImperial(wingspan)" webc:nokeep></span>). They function much like a second pair of arms, consisting of two interconnected limbs that form a bendable arm, complete with a hand-like structure at the end. In this "hand", a sharp talon takes the place of a thumb, and a sturdy membrane stretches between its long joints.
 
-Sebin makes sure to keep his wings in shape like the rest of his body during workouts. This is especially important for his aerial pursuits, as his wings need to be strong enough to carry him reliably through the air.
+Sebin makes sure to keep his wings in shape like the rest of his body during workouts. This is especially important for taking flight, as his wings need to be strong enough to carry him reliably through the air.
 
-While Sebin's wings can carry him short to medium distances, there are limitations to his flights. He only ventures into the air when airspace has been declared open for wing bearers, and he always makes sure to take regular breaks to rest and recharge. When Sebin walks on solid ground, he keeps his wings folded close to his body to avoid bumping into things.
+While Sebin's wings can carry him short to medium distances, there are limitations to his flights. Denser cities might place restrictions on wing bearers that prohibit him from taking off. When grounded like that, he's mindful to keep his wings folded close to his body, as to not bump into things. In more open areas, like the countryside, this is not so much an issue. If he takes flight, he always makes sure to take regular breaks to rest and recharge. 
 
 ## Head
 
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 Unlike most reptilians, Sebin has rounded pupils. Yellow spikes above his eyes serve as his eyebrows. The same yellow spikes also run along his jawbone. Two pointed, slightly curved horns protrude from his head, as is characteristic among dragons.
 
-Sebin likes to wear his medium-length, blue hair loose. But he's not avert to experiment with different hair styles.
+Sebin likes to wear his blue, medium-length hair open and loose. He's not avert to experimenting with different hair styles, but he keeps coming back to a mullet.
 
 As a dragon, Sebin's hearing is highly attuned, capable of detecting a wider range of frequencies than humans. His long and pointed ears are very flexible, enabling him to pinpoint sounds without needing to turn his head. This flexibility also allows him to convey emotions through subtle body language.
 
 Sebin's jaws are equipped with razor-sharp teeth that can easily sink into anything he bites—whether that's food or an adversary. Embedded between these powerful jaws lies a pointed tongue, typical of reptilians.
 
-When threatened or enraged, Sebin can unleash a stream of fire from his mouth, which can reach temperatures of up to 160 °C (<span @text="$data.toFahrenheit(160)" webc:nokeep></span> °F). This potent defense mechanism is made possible by glands in his throat that produce a flammable mixture.
+Sebin can spit fire from his mouth by producing a flammable mixture through glands in his throat. This fire can reach temperatures of up to 160&nbsp;°C (<span @text="$data.toFahrenheit(160)" webc:nokeep></span>&nbsp;°F), depending on how potent he wants it to be. He uses this ability as one of the defense mechanisms in his arsenal to fend off enemies. However, it also comes in handy as a tool in everyday life situations, e.g. when cooking food, helping a neighbor with their frozen car door during winter or lighting fireplaces on camping trips (which is why his friends sometimes affectionately call him "Zippo").
 
 ## Upper body
 
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 Sebin in not just about raw physical strength, but also equal distribution of muscle mass throughout his body in order to achieve several benefits: Stronger arms enable him to launch fire projectiles farther and with greater precision. A well-maintained upper body ensures flexibility and mobility, while strong wing arms allow for longer periods in the air. And with powerful legs, he enjoys increased agility on the ground.
 
+Of course, the training also helps him exude self-confidence, and he oftentimes finds himself unable to resist showing off his physique when he notices someone's wayward glances.
+
 ## Additional Muscle References
 
 Sebin's drawn muscle anatomy can vary quite a bit. It can range from athletic to body builder type, though the focus leans more to the latter.