feat: 💬 overhaul sebin's anatomy page

src/sebin/anatomy.md

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   <traits :@traits="$data.getTraits('anatomy')"></traits>
 </quick-info>
 
-Sebin is the offspring of a human and a dragon. Like a human, he is a bipedal plantigrade. Most of his body is covered with red scales. Yellow scales run from the underside of his jaw over his chest and legs to the underside of the tip of his tail. These scales are particularly hard and function like plate armor to better protect vital organs.
+Sebin is the offspring of a human and a dragon, commonly known as an anthro dragon. His whole body is covered in a layer of flexible, vibrant red scales, next to a set of yellow ones that run along his jaw, across his chest, and down the underside of his tail. The yellow scales on his chest and abdomen are harder than the rest and act like plate armor to protect vital organs.
 
-Sebin's finger and toe tips are equipped with sharp black claws. He equally uses them as tools and weapons.
+Sebin's fingers and toes are equipped with sharp black claws, which he uses in all sorts of useful ways: from opening packaging with a quick scratch to pricking cans with pointed pressure. They allow him to forgo special tools for a few applications. They're also invaluable for self-defense to fend off unfriendly fellows.
 
-A ridge of brown thorns runs from his head over his back to the tip of his tail. However, they are too blunt to cause injury. His tail is about 1.04 meters (<span @text="$data.toImperial(104)" webc:nokeep></span>) in length.
+A ridge of brown thorns runs along Sebin's spine, from the base of his neck all the way down to his tail tip. These thorns may look intimidating, but they're too blunt to cause injury. His tail is about <span @text="tailLength / 100" webc:nokeep></span> meters (<span @text="toImperial(tailLength)" webc:nokeep></span>) in length and is quite strong and flexible. He uses it as support to lean against when a back rest is hard to come by as well as holding onto things. As with his claws, his tail is both tool and defense instrument, a good whack from it is sure to make you see stars.
 
-Sebin has a muscular build that he keeps in shape with regular exercise.
+Despite his reptilian heritage, Sebin inherited nipples from the human side of his family.
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+Sebin has a muscular build that he keeps in shape with regular exercise, which he is very disciplined about. He prioritizes strength training, cardiovascular workouts, and flexibility exercises as part of his regular routine. He always challenges himself and pushes his body to its limits.
 
 ## Wings
 
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   <traits :@traits="$data.getTraits('wings')"></traits>
 </quick-info>
 
-Sebin's wings have a span of about 4.17 meters (13'8"). They function very much like a second pair of arms: two interconnected limbs that form a bendable arm, at the end of which sits a hand-like structure, adorned with a talon in exchange for a thumb, with a sturdy membrane stretched between its long fingers. On solid ground, he keeps his wings closed so as not to accidentally bump into anything with them. Sebin also pays a lot of attention to his wings when working out, so that they can keep carrying him reliably through the air. Though, he only travels short to medium distances through the air before he has to take a rest - as long as the airspace in the area has been declared open for wing bearers.
+Sebin's wings span around <span @text="wingspan / 100" webc:nokeep></span> meters (<span @text="toImperial(wingspan)" webc:nokeep></span>) from tip to tip. They function much like a second pair of arms, consisting of two interconnected limbs that form a bendable arm, complete with a hand-like structure at the end. In this hand, a sharp talon takes the place of a thumb, and a sturdy membrane stretches between its long fingers.
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+Sebin makes sure to keep his wings in shape like the rest of his body during workouts. This is especially important for his aerial pursuits, as his wings need to be strong enough to carry him reliably through the air.
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+While Sebin's wings can carry him short to medium distances, there are limitations to his flights. He only ventures into the air when airspace has been declared open for wing bearers, and he always makes sure to take regular breaks to rest and recharge. When Sebin walks on solid ground, he keeps his wings folded close to his body to avoid bumping into things.
 
 ## Head
 
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   <traits :@traits="$data.getTraits('head')"></traits>
 </quick-info>
 
-Despite what one might expect with reptilians, Sebin's pupils are rounded instead of slit-shaped. Yellow spikes running above his eyelids serve as eyebrows. These spikes are also found along his jaw bone. Two pointed, slightly curved, black horns protrude from his head. He usually wears his medium-length, blue hair loose. His long, pointed ears are very flexible, allowing him to hear sounds around him without having to turn his head. They are also used for non-verbal communication, to express emotions through body language. His hearing perceives a wider range of frequencies, making it superior to that of a human. His jaws are equipped with razor-sharp teeth that effortlessly sink into anything he manages to bite, be it nourishment or adversaries. Embedded between them lies his tongue, which is typically pointed for reptilians. Glands in his throat produce a mixture which he uses to spit fire, which can reach up to around 100 °C (<span @text="$data.toFahrenheit(100)" webc:nokeep></span> °F).
+Unlike most reptilians, Sebin has rounded pupils. Yellow spikes above his eyes serve as his eyebrows. The same yellow spikes also run along his jawbone. Two pointed, slightly curved horns protrude from his head, as is characteristic among dragons.
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+Sebin likes to wear his medium-length, blue hair loose. But he's not avert to experiment with different hair styles.
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+As a dragon, Sebin's hearing is highly attuned, capable of detecting a wider range of frequencies than humans. His long and pointed ears are very flexible, enabling him to pinpoint sounds without needing to turn his head. This flexibility also allows him to convey emotions through subtle body language.
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+Sebin's jaws are equipped with razor-sharp teeth that can easily sink into anything he bites—whether that's food or an adversary. Embedded between these powerful jaws lies a pointed tongue, typical of reptilians.
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+When threatened or enraged, Sebin can unleash a stream of fire from his mouth, which can reach temperatures of up to 160 °C (<span @text="$data.toFahrenheit(160)" webc:nokeep></span> °F). This potent defense mechanism is made possible by glands in his throat that produce a flammable mixture.
 
 ## Upper body
 
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   <traits :@traits="$data.getTraits('muscle')"></traits>
 </quick-info>
 
-At the age of 17, Sebin gradually began to keep his body in shape on a regular basis. His favorite exercises include weightlifting (with both dumbbells and barbells), lat pulldown, leg press and cable curls. He works out three days a week with one day off between training days, rotating the body regions he trains each day.
+At 17 years old, Sebin started prioritizing regular exercise to maintain his physical health and fitness. He developed a well-rounded workout routine that includes weightlifting, lat pulldowns, leg presses, and cable curls for a wholistic regimen.
 
-Sebin is very concerned with an even distribution of muscle mass, but pays particular attention to his back, chest and arms. A strong chest with strong arms helps to throw fire projectiles as far as possible. A strong back guarantees a longer stay in the air.
+Sebin in not just about raw physical strength, but also equal distribution of muscle mass throughout his body in order to achieve several benefits: Stronger arms enable him to launch fire projectiles farther and with greater precision. A well-maintained upper body ensures flexibility and mobility, while strong wing arms allow for longer periods in the air. And with powerful legs, he enjoys increased agility on the ground.
 
 ## Additional Muscle References
 
-An assortment of additional references how Sebin can be drawn.
+Sebin's drawn muscle anatomy can vary quite a bit. It can range from athletic to body builder type, though the focus leans more to the latter.
 
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   <ref-img webc:for="ref of [...Array(9).keys()]"
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 ## Danger Zone
 
-You haven't seen it *all*, yet! 👀💦
+There's still one piece of anatomy you *haven't* seen yet! 👀💦
 </div>
 
 ## Penis
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   <traits :@traits="$data.getTraits('naughty')"></traits>
 </quick-info>
 
-Despite his reptilian appearance, Sebin has nipples, a feature of the human side of his family. Furthermore, his external testicles represent another humanized feature. Where relatives of his ilk possess a slit in which the penis lies protectively, Sebin possesses a pouch-like sheath from which the tip of the penis protrudes slightly. The shape of his shaft is predominantly humanoid, but it is surrounded by ridges and has no equivalent of a foreskin. When aroused, the coal-black shaft swells and pushes out of the sheath until fully erect, the sheath wrapping around the root of the shaft like a ring. However, he can also push it out in a flaccid state, e.g. when needing to pass water.
+Sebin's genitalia are a mix of both human and dragon features: while his testicles are exposed, his shaft usually rests inside a sheath-like pouch. The shape of his shaft is predominantly humanoid, circled by ridges that cover its entire length.
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+When aroused, the charcoal colored shaft swells, pushes out of the sheath and stretches it to sit snug around the shaft's base until fully erect. It can, however, also extend outwards in a flaccid state when needed.
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